I feel my essay provides a compelling analysis of my community’s cultural norms because I really went in depth about my online community, the history behind them and how they operate. I describe my community at face value as well as go in depth so I can give the reader an introduction first then a deeper analysis. I feel my essay does its job when it comes to providing a social-scientific interpretation because Italk about it when it comes to the competitive aspect of esports. My essay emphasizes analysis over description because I go in-depth about the aspects of the organization and some of the rules and rituals that the players have. I feel like I need to work on my implementation of the ethnographic perspective because I didn’t really go in depth the first draft so that’s something that I need to add for my final. Yes I feel my essay paints a portrait of my community with a rich description because I explained what the esports community was and what they do. I also analyzed the rules of the esports and the community they have built. I still need to add some quotes from esports players and a couple more pictures that really highlight what the esports is about.